Hello everyone! Just a quick update.
I've spent the last few days fixing the dialogue and text as I think I will be making the original text box.
Here are the fixes:
- Altered most of the dialogue to sound more casual than formal.
- Edited dialogue in Shiruta to help set the scene of a human appearing in the spirit world.
- No story elements have been changes
- Fixed a lot of grammatical/ spellings errors (Sorry everyone)
- Fixed being able to get a soda in Shiruta as it serves no purpose.
- Added a little more interesting dialogue throughout the prologue