Version 1.2 has now been released.
This fixes a lot of the grammar and more importantly spelling mistakes. It also fixes the only bug that has been reported.
Looping text bug - The looping text that appears in certain situations has now been fixed, now when you start this scene it will work correctly from a new game, from certain save points it will loop once only now before continuing.
But spelling is the order of the day, and this patch should resolve at least 95% of it, but certain words may still be wrong but those will also be corrected soon as well.