This is what I've been working on the past week or so to prepare for the final revision of the demo. Once all the graphical changes are in, I'm more likely to not change or update the demo until closer to release so look forward to that!
Changes for version 0.2.10a:
* Removed all instances of "And with that," since every sentence sounded better without that filler phase.
* Re-wrote a small part of an Eva scene to make room for future CG
* Re-wrote a small part of a Sera scene to make room for future CG
* Re-wrote a small part of a Wren scene to make room for future CG
* Re-wrote some of the basketball scene with new side character relevant to Sera's route (no sprite yet)
* Re-wrote Intro scene. It should be noticeably different, but follow the same story.
* Re-wrote many scene descriptions to be more readable
* Added two new backgrounds
* Removed Dates from the game so there's a more vague sense of time; Don't worry, I'm still tracking what day/week everything occurs on
* Changed a choice for Aria question; only one "good" answer, though it's still inconsequential
* Extended dialogue for some choices when tell Damien which girl you're into. This section will be skipped in the main route since it's mostly just teasing future content.
Don't feel obligated to re-read the demo because the story is all the same, it will just feel better written, mostly the intro and day 1, but also the few scenes mentioned above.